Wednesday, 3 June 2020

poem

my hammock my electric bike
my trampoline my ice cream
my school my pool
my inside swing my little assisting
my pet parrot my  little Corot
my pet snake my birthday cake
my toy truck my good luck
my it wasn't me my climbing a tree
my  snake hatching my parrot catching
my cow my wait but how



today I had to make a poem about my life it was fun and hard to rime at the same time but I liked it because I got ideas from my friends. 

3 comments:

  1. Hi luke I loved reading your poem it was really interesting My Favorited poem was my pet parrot my little Corot. keep up your interesting work.

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  3. Hi Luke i loved reading your poem and the words you use in your poem really stand out and it was very interesting my favourite part in the poem is your pet snake good work keep it up.

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